I personally think your Leia’s son line edit is a big improvement over the original. If we could get the word “birth” in there instead of “death” it would be even better, but that would just be gravy. It’s already good without it.
Post #1426386
- Author
- CaptainFaraday
- Parent topic
- The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1426386/action/topic#1426386
- Date created
- 28-Apr-2021, 2:43 AM