I just double checked - Disney+ does confirm that the original line is “Ghouls.” I could see it being a comedic “Cool,” but I think my personal preference would still be to have the stormtroopers be kind of intimidated by them. Especially since the Knights are ~~kind of~~ lame in the film, I think it’s important to try to make our first impression of them at least be intimidating and powerful, rather than just some hired goons with dumb, oversized medieval weapons and weird masks.

AntonioGK, those lines are well done, but I do think the second one definitely stands out still, unfortunately. I was also thinking, as an alternative to the “Death/Birth of her son” line, we could change it to simply “Leia sensed her son at the end of her Jedi path.” That way, we’d still get that double meaning thing of Ben’s birth; but rather than alluding to his “rebirth” at the end, the double meaning would be that he would be waiting for her, in the Force, when she passes; and they would go on together in the Cosmic Force, each having completed their journeys as Jedi.

MR, thank you! bbghost’s original example of the idea removes the jump cut, so we could definitely go with that version instead. (I was just trying to be fancy with it lol.)