I like it myself. I just know that for others they might not like the idea that Rey can hit a flying target like that so easily.
It’s cool that you hear the explosion of the trooper echo throughout the valley.
Just for my $0.02c on the Rey bullseye cut, my thinking was that Rey and Kylo by this film are already basically superheroes. She bullseyes that speeder in the air earlier, Poe calls her their “best fighter” but outside of Jedi duels you don’t get a huge sense of that. This little cut does a lot towards selling that, imo.