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Post #1425917

Author
sherlockpotter
Parent topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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Date created
25-Apr-2021, 1:46 PM

Frankly, I think it would benefit from both changes. Cutting down to just Rey shooting would reduce some of the literal and figurative noise of the scene; and having a brief pause before they start sinking would let the audience catch their breath for a moment before the next action beat.