Well, it took 3 hours and still needs a ton of work, but here’s a mockup of what my idea would look like:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vsoK55tHOEA
This is great! I, too, got chills.
My only real constructive criticism is that the final shot of Luke’s face when it punches in is too clearly different from the previous shot. I’d keep the same blurry image of a figure standing in the smoke we just saw, rather than suddenly having a sharp close-up of his face.
Alternatively, you could have the broadcast cut off slightly later than it does, so everyone sees one super clear shot of Luke emerging from the smoke before the signal is cut. That could be a cool iconic image.