Chapter 10 Changelog (was a big one):

Plenty of streamlining (removing unneeded details), and making things more clear
C-3PO cycles through his memory banks before he says that he’s saying goodbye to his friends. This is what prompts Poe to ask what he’s doing. It achieves the effect that he is also looking at Luke, Leia, and Han before he dies.
Finn eyes Zorii and Poe exiting the workshop longingly
Removed all romantic inclinations between Poe and Zorii. They are just old friends.
Overhauled Poe being a Debby Downer about nobody helping the Resistance:

Zorii points out that Kijimi City is in a state of active rebellion, as are many other worlds. It isn’t just about the First Order instilling fear.
Poe witnesses a group of teenagers doing graffiti art of a man holding a glowing sword when she tells him this.
Poe admits that people are rebelling, but insists that everyone is out for themselves since nobody came to help them on Crait.

As a result of the aforementioned change, I have removed a second reference to the retcon that the First Order was blocking their call to the galaxy
Rey tells Finn that Ochi’s ship was used by her parents, not that they simply left in it (which implies that Ochi didn’t notice the screaming girl behind him).
3PO’s message refers to the Sanctuary Moon of Endor. Finn refers to it as where the second Death Star exploded, not where the last war ended.
Chewie is not revealed to still be alive until Rey senses it. As a result, moved Kylo’s interrogation scene to directly after this.
To see changes to the interrogation scene, see the bottom of the last page
Moved Zorii’s scene from the next chapter to the end of this one
Link:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/15Tg1J8GT7T42bciRhcsFWJYUxdIpSN_w/view?usp=sharing