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Vultural
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22-Apr-2021, 11:34 AM

Self Help (Fight Club) - thecuddlyninja

Cuddly details a classic triangle. A girl, a man, and the man’s alter-ego.
The jagged relationship between Marla and Tylers in “Fight Club.”
This crackles from the onset with the opposites attract trope.
Then, for a chunk of time, Marla disappears.
Instead of a short, this feels more like a cobbling of fragments.
I wish cuddly had made different choices to enhance the continuity. As this is, this is a bit messy.
Sound is not always clear, either, and dialogue suffers.
Part of this is cuddly’s fault. Guys helming this particular Consecution antho bear some responsibility, as well, in not exercising enough editorial control and providing feedback.
If honchos in charge did try to advise cuddles, my apologies.