Chapter 7 Changelog:
- I’ll be honest, most of the stuff here comes from Captain Faraday because of how “meh” Rae Carson is at writing action scenes. Huge shoutout to Faraday’s work on the Pasaana chase. I did a few modifications, but most of it is from him.
- Rey recognizes Ochi’s ship as her parent’s ship. This will be explained later on in the story. Basically, Rey’s dad stole Ochi’s ship to escape Exegol. So him chasing her parents down was not only at Palpatine’s command but also to get his favorite ship back (which is also the reason why Ochi would want him to never leave Exegol again as punishment).
- Finn tells Poe that there is something he never got to tell him instead of Rey 😉
- Poe demands to hear what Finn was going to tell him, but he won’t until he explains where he learned his “sketchy stuff”. This creates a much better character dynamic between the two of them because they are both keeping secrets from each other and they are bickering about it.
- Removed another reference to Lando being on Pasaana for the past 20 years.
Link:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1HebDtcBfO0nTDW_3_YXBi5myXuAvSBUA/view?usp=sharing
(IGNORE IT SAYING CHAPTER 6 THAT IS AN ERROR)