Here’s a different take on the Bail’s apartment scene with dialogue from The Force Unleashed:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1sPI80MXqw8pO1wm34C0mLx2jCck-EUk8/view?usp=sharing
It’s far from perfect, but there is potential I think.
“The constitution is in shreds! Amendment after amendment!”
Whoever wrote that line has no idea how government works. It always bothered me, and it’s why I’ve never liked that deleted scene.