Some good suggestions in there (especially some that address things I wasn’t sure about). The finding of the lightsaber was a work around for me to explain why she didn’t use it on Tatooine… in retrospect, I don’t think that needs explaining especially with the scene on Ahch-To. Other suggestions are actually what many other people think are a strength of the edit.
Ultimately, thank you for the feedback! I’ll definitely be using some of the suggestions!