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Post #1423276

Author
sherlockpotter
Parent topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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Date created
11-Apr-2021, 4:09 AM

Based on feedback, here are a few more variations. I tried experimenting with stretching out pauses by reusing (and reversing) a shot of Jannah on the horse-thing. Hopefully it’s not too apparent.

My intention with all of these tests is for everyone to go insane over this.

  • “Don’t You Know an Ally” v2 - Moved 3PO’s line to immediately after the crane shot; added the additional Jannah shot
    https://streamable.com/82rw1u
  • “Highly Trained Resistance Spy” v2 - Moved the line to before Rey’s, but after a new awkward pause, per Hal’s suggestion; added the Jannah shot.
    https://streamable.com/7wp2rm
  • “Don’t You Know An Ally” v3 - 3PO’s line is immediately after the crane shot; moved Horse Guy™ between 3PO’s line and Rey’s line; added the Jannah shot after Rey’s line; split the 3PO shot, putting the second part of it before Jannah agrees to help.
    https://streamable.com/ldxu2u