The added words can definitely be removed. I do think if we go for one of the funnier lines, that there should be some sort of exasperated reaction from the others, either audibly or visually, but I’m open to suggestions for that.

I had some slight misgivings about the ally line, just because why would 3PO think they could be trusted if Poe doesn’t trust them? But they’re clearly not stormtroopers…maybe reverse the shot, so that 3PO turns to look at Poe instead and says it to him? (Maybe I’m overthinking it and it would be fine as is…)

And Hal, moving 3PO’s line to earlier, is that kind of like what I did in that last clip there? How do you feel about it?