Chapter 5 Changelog:

General streamlining and cleanup (as always). Added details to make things clearer.
Wrote an entirely new portion to the chapter where Kylo seeks to learn the truth about Vader’s mask (seriously, why wasn’t this included in the original novel?)
Made it more clear why Kylo is only reforging his mask now: he was waiting until he destroyed the Resistance, but now that he is about to steal everything from Palpy he feels encouraged enough to do it now. The mask is the symbol of the Ren dynasty.
Made it less obvious that Hux is the spy. I know everyone reading this will already know what happens in the film, but Rey’s lineage is still kept a secret, so why not?
Link:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1NcuAxR9_1C9YxBf6M4xLeQB7goI91fLc/view?usp=sharing