Chapter 4 Changelog:
- General streamlining and cleanup
- Palpatine’s message is played for the Resistance. They don’t know who is speaking in it until Poe clarifies that Kylo Ren found it originated with Palpatine.
- Rae Carson completely messed up the paragraph on Anakin/Palpatine. Palpatine lied about learning the secret to cheating death from his master. He later tells Anakin that together they can discover the secret, so clearly he didn’t know it at the time of ROTS.
- Restored the briefing scene to its theatrical length (no cam recordings of Star Destroyers rising)
- Inserted some references to Rey relying too much on proving herself to others
- Leia doesn’t imply that Ben is going to become a Sith. Instead, she realizes that he is likely trying to do his own thing with the First Order.
- Rey considers that maybe Maz had been wrong about her calling since Luke’s lightsaber is resisting her
- Rey worries that she isn’t good enough for her friends
Link:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1UpV_EbBfxdLKF5W64LzwSGP1W4aZtUsF/view?usp=sharing
Not sure that I like repeating Palpatine’s message again at the beginning (it’s also in the first chapter). If anybody has an idea on how to avoid that it would be appreciated.