- Chapters continue to be reshuffled (this was originally chapter 8, now it’s 9, I’m not gonna bother listing that any more because the numbers are all just shifted one higher).
- Mostly just quality-of-life edits and smoothing the flow of the text as usual.
- Changed D-O’s name to D-0. Droids usually have letters and numbers in their names, and the original spelling looked weirdly wrong. Also, added “Deeyo” as a “written” name for him in dialogue, like the other droids get (eg Threepio, Artoo, etc).
- Added cherry blossom trees and kawara tiles to Kijimi, since it’s basically just Space Japan anyway.
- Made Zorii less murderous in her introduction, since it doesn’t gel with the rest of her scenes with Poe.