Hate to be the sour puss once again, but as much as I like this idea on paper, I don’t think what we have works. Jannah still offers to help them get to the wreck right away, only this time there’s no explanation, they just go right from guns drawn to chummy chummy. I don’t think the intended effect comes across.
Post #1422611
- Author
- DominicCobb
- Parent topic
- The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1422611/action/topic#1422611
- Date created
- 7-Apr-2021, 3:46 AM