Since I don’t have a way to separate channels (and other techy things) I did some quick clips to start the ball rolling. Again, it is VERY rough and I am limited on what I can do, it is more of a visual check on it.

Rough Idea 1

https://vimeo.com/533712755
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Pretty much per Rogue’s suggestion. Again, it doesn’t have any sound adjustments and I just took out the sound on certain segments when someone was talking.

Rough Idea 2

https://vimeo.com/533713963
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This has a little change. One aspect per Rogue’s idea was there to be a pause and no one is speaking after Poe says “it depends.” It is probably just me, but because of the camera movement, it didn’t feel right to have a pause and the camera is zooming in during the quiet. That may be fine when the music/ambient sounds are playing. However, we go to zooming onto Poe and Rey and then get a shot change to Rey up close. So it kinda felt off to me, visually.

So this idea instead jumps to C-3p0 who “breaks the ice” which seems precisely what he does. We can re-dub him introducing himself. We cut to the one guy who kinda looks at the crew and then Jannah. Then we go to Rey. It seems more natural in a filming sort of way since the first example zooms in on Poe/Rey and then cuts to her. It felt like it needs something to break it up slightly.