Chapter 3 Changelog:

Kept the holochess game where it is. The ending of this novelization will be a moment between Rey and Ben, so I don’t want Chewie, Finn, and Poe to come along.
Streamlining of descriptions, most inspired by Captain Faraday
Removed the paragraph where it’s implied Finn harbors romantic feelings for Rey. He cares for her as a friend. Don’t want his heart to be broken when Rey doesn’t chose him in the end haha.
Made it clear what the First Order’s plan was with Boolio. They knew he was helping the Resistance, but they were waiting for an unknown/non-routine vehicle to approach the mining colony before they attacked so they could get some actual Resistance members, too.
Removed lightspeed skipping. I considered trying to make it work but it would require tons of descriptions regarding lightspeed-capable TIEs and hyperspace tracking (which for some reason the original novel ignores).
Moved Kylo reforging his mask to the another chapter, replaced with the da bois returning to Ajan Kloss
Rey is pouring over the Jedi texts to find peace, which she feels will make the visions go away
Rey begins to wonder if perhaps she is already too far gone since Luke won’t speak to her but he will to Leia
Finn clarifies that R2 contains a message (Palpy’s) and a report on some planet (Exegol)
Link:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1D3ByAXyXfVBC-GvbzhvpI7JT3yq8BSMT/view?usp=sharing