Lol, I’m glad people beat me to mentioning how random it is for Babu to send a message about the “last hope”.

I think mentioning it being on Endor defeats the purpose of it being an ancient dagger. If we don’t change the Babu Frik mention, I would probably drop these changes entirely. Unless you wanted to somehow make it clearer that Ochi made the dagger, or inscribed on it himself.

If you were to cut out those Jannah lines, perhaps you could cut it in a way as if there is a pause, a little bit of tension, but then Rey says what she says with the hope that being honest will be seen as a sign of trust. You could to the shot of the random guy, making us wait for their response, and then Jannah says they can take them there by water. Maybe you could replace 3PO’s line with something else too.