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Post #1421829

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CMMAP
Parent topic
The Clone Wars: Refocused [COMPLETE]
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Date created
3-Apr-2021, 8:40 AM

EddieDean said:

Ah yeah that’s a tricky one.

I’m trying to convey the following concepts:

  • The political academy (which teaches kids politics) is for youths - it is a youth political academy
  • The youth political academy has some particularly high-achieving students - the youth political academy’s “brightest”
  • These are the people Ahsoka is secretly teaching - the “brightest” students at the political academy for youths.

So perhaps I should present it as:

“…for Ahsoka to secretly teach the top students at the political academy for youths.”

aah, now i understand 😃
the new sentence is good, i would change „top“ with „most promising“