Testing, I like all of the ideas in that opening crawl. The thing with an opening crawl, though, is that it needs to be straight to the point and deliver only the most relevant information to what you’re about to experience.
I believe I have included everything in that crawl throughout the first chapter itself. If I need to make some of it more clear I could definitely work on that. But personally, I enjoy having the intake of information be more gradual and spaced out.
I mean, Rebel spies don’t appear in ANH, despite being mentioned in its crawl. (Yeah, Rogue One exists, but I’m talking about in the context of ANH itself)
Basically, the crawl is the “before” and the main part of the movie is the “present” or “after”.