Good to hear! I hope the modifications I’ve made since your first read are good enough. Hopefully they aren’t too different from how you would have patched it up.
Yep, I think it all reads well.
Post #1421703
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- CaptainFaraday
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- The Rise of Skywalker Expanded Edition by Rae Carson: The "Tragedy of Vader" Edit (v2 NOW AVAILABLE)
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- 2-Apr-2021, 8:04 PM