Here’s my suggestion for an opening crawl…
The flame of hope burns! Following the heroic sacrifice of Luke Skywalker on Crait, the daring RESISTANCE has been reborn. The diabolical FIRST ORDER, facing insurrection on a thousand worlds, is teetering on the edge.
But the dead speak! The galaxy has heard a mysterious broadcast, a threat of REVENGE from the shadows beyond known space.
As Rey, the last hope of the Jedi, is continuing her training, Supreme Leader Kylo Ren rages in search of the phantom menace, determined to destroy this threat to his declining power…
Credit for a lot of this goes to /u/persistentInquiry from Reddit.
EDIT: Polished the crawl a bit.