Damn, Nev, you’ve basically writing a novel.
To be honest I have only skimmed the Word document, but you’re saying this is a more expanded version of the treatment you wrote here, but in that process it has changed drastically.
But, now you’re saying it has changed even more, and you’re going to write this out from scratch again?
What made you decide to take out Thrawn? I have to say it was cool to see him, but I at the same time I can see how the story could be served well to focus more on the characters that already exist in the story.