My one suggestion DZ is to mention “moon”. So, “From the southern shore of the moon of the Endor system”. Endor is the gas giant. The other moon is covered in ice, so obviously it wouldn’t have shores.
Post #1421392
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- Jar Jar Bricks
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- The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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- 1-Apr-2021, 1:18 PM