These are all interesting ideas. Kijimi being in revolt is a really good addition in my opinion, and I especially like the Rebel graffiti one, referencing the movie poster. The Dagger changes would really improve things as well, I reckon.
Thanks. I think not only the dagger changes make it more mysterious, but I think it is interesting from a character perspective too, since Rey has to sort of embrace the dark side in order for her to find the Wayfinder. Any additions that make us doubt Rey’s ability to resist the darkness would be nice, I think.
I personally like 3PO having a comedic line right as he’s deactivated; the contrast works for me. It’s a funny line, but also, it reminds us that 3PO is this unintentionally funny bumbling droid we like, and now he’s gone. I’m realising I like C-3PO being comedic in TROS than most people do, though, so your mileage may vary.
I like comedic 3PO too! Maybe another funny line could be played around with? I’m just iffy on this one because it make it seem like 3PO is going back on his decision to make this sacrifice.
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- Add details to Kijimi to establish that it is revolting.
Digitally insert trash all over the streets, open sewage lines, add insert shots of people pinching their noses when they go outdoors.
Lol, isn’t the English language awful?