It’s a great idea to convey that the helmet is saved, but with this new line most of Kylo’s anger is lost from the original.
I was actually somewhat confused why Kylo was so angry in that moment. Wouldn’t it be a good thing that she is in the bowels of HIS ship? She’s basically trapped.
EDIT: Context clip for those wondering: https://youtu.be/7ZPMW9xCZdk