Would it make sense to try restructuring the end of Exegol?

Palpatine lightings the ships
Rey hears the voices and ghosts arrives
Poe says this is our last chance we need to hit those cannons now
Maybe use the quote from the trailer: “Let your death be the final word in the story of Skywalker” as it has more impact with Luke and Anakin being there
Rey protects herself with the lightsaber
Cut to Finn and Jannah blowing up the cruiser
Poe’s happy because the command ship is destroyed
Rose says Finn didn’t board the ship
Rey takes down Palpatine and rocks smash everyone, Rey drops the lightsabers
Cut to Finn getting on the Falcon and the Star Destroyer smashing into the planet
Rey falls and “dies”
Finn reacts
Ben saves Rey

Not saying this is ideal but it does flow better when Rey dies immediately after the duel. It would just suck losing Finn’s reaction