Oh and I admit, sherlock, that mockup’s got a few things going for it. I like having Rey collapse after the showdown and losing the “crush enemies with ROCKS! Yeah, THE LIGHT SIDE OF THE FORCE BITCHES!” moment.
However, I still just don’t think it works overall in the big picture. I’m sorry, I swear I don’t have it out for you or anything!
Haha, you’re fine, Hal. Is there something in particular about it that doesn’t work? Maybe it could be ironed out?