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Post #1420796

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nluckett
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Star Wars Episode III: Labyrinth Of Evil (Released)
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Date created
29-Mar-2021, 11:56 PM

Not worth its own thread, but I made a few edits if anyones interested. PM if so.

I kinda combined both endings.

Leia still gets to spend time with Padme, but we also get the beautiful funeral procession. At first I thought it was maybe not logical since shes probably an enemy of the empire now. But those kinds of empires like to pretend they love people after they die, to show they arent intimated by them, so I figure she could have an open funeral.

  • I took the line from Padme about “Obi-wan, I know there still good in him” and cut it into the birth scene.
  • I put the funeral as a mid credits scene

Felt like putting Padmes line back in made it clear to me that she hadnt given up on him, and it’s a nice tie in to Luke later… has a bit of his mother in him.

Other minor tweaks

  • put music under early Grevious fight
  • removed C3POs line towards the end about feeling helpless
  • turned down the volume on Quigons message to yoda

Anyway, wanted to say great work to Hal and all for this edit. I watched all the prequels in their most completed form and I think it may be my favorite trilogy of the bunch now.