Sure you could do all that, but if you draw even more attention to that problem people will wonder even more why the Falcon couldn’t just hover down to land like it does any other time. The SFX shot would have to convey that the blast hit a repulsorlift, making the Falcon lose altitude in that shot before limping out of the hangar.
Poe’s line about the landing gear and the shot of Rey opening a wire panel are both so brief that they’re hard to register, so when you see the image of the crash landing you’re kinda like “what?” Literally anything that would show it visually take damage would work.
Maybe as the stormtroopers are blasting away at the Falcon, one of the shots could have a bigger explosion on impact, implying that it hit something important.
I think you also show the engines blinking out as the flies toward Kef-Bir/Endor, implying they had to just sort of glide the rest of the way to the surface. It would help show why they literally crash landed, rather than just land gently without using the landing gear.