So I think the best sequence might be to only have the other two shots: TIEs flying towards red lava planet > Establishing shot of the planets surface, revealing a forest growing amidst the lava > The TIEs, now descended to the surface, fly over the forest > cut to Kylo on the surface of said forest.
This would be worth mocking up as well. I’ll see about it, possibly tonight. I like all three of these shots, it’s just a question of whether they work best with all three or some combination of two.