I worry that first time watchers won’t immediately tell what exactly they’re looking at in the new lava shot.

Starting on a giant red ball. Then to a close-up of random formations of lava that are hard to tangibly grasp or even wrap your head around what angle the camera is facing (is it down towards the earth? In a way, it’s now a super fast zoom from space to the Mustafar ground or something.) Then an alternate closer angle, with the TIEs popping back into the motion of the scenes.

It’s a little all over the place and kinds breaks the pace.
I like showing some lava instead of immediately seeing the castle, but it needs more connective tissue.