Agree with poppasketti - it looks great, but the highlights could probably be tweaked a little more to match the orangey/pinky palette of the rest of the sequence.

Also, I feel like we should still hear the TIEs flying in the new shot. It might also be cool to see just their shadows flying across the landscape, so that we can more effectively convey them descending from atmosphere to high altitude, to castle level, to forest level, to ground. There might be too much contrast there to show the shadows effectively though…

Great work on the shot, both of you! The music sounds really seamless.