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Post #1419295

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EditModd
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Attack of the Clones - Altered and Extended Edition (V.1) (Now Complete and Released)
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Date created
22-Mar-2021, 4:03 PM
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22-Mar-2021, 4:04 PM
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EditModd
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I agree with you about your analysis, and it’s not a drastic restructure. I think I lump together two scenes from each subplot, since I’m getting rid of their horribly creepy first kiss scene, Anakin riding those weird giant tick-looking creatures, and their conversation at night about whether or not to hide their romance. You still jump back and forth, it’s just streamlined because most of the romantic scenes are just atrocious. In replacement of those I added in the scenes with Padme’s family. Their romance will be much slower and more subtle in this edit, with their first kiss being at the arena.