Seventh chapter:
https://pastebin.com/NNHNKL4H
Password: CaptainFaraday
Changelog:
- Nothing significant. Just quality-of-life edits.
Eighth chapter:
https://pastebin.com/Wkn2psKV
Password: CaptainFaraday
Changelog:
- Added Ochi of Bestoon’s armour from the comics.
- Extended C-3PO’s explanation of the Sith Cultists, to set up the new explanation for why the dagger lines up with the Death Star wreckage.
- Kylo’s ship no longer explodes, just crash lands. He also wasn’t trying to actually kill Rey; it was more like a test to see how far she’s come and how in sync they are.
- Removed the cutaway to Kylo’s perspective as he climbs out of the TIE. It adds nothing, and stops the tension ratcheting up as Rey tries to pull the transport back down.
- Moved the reveal of Chewbacca still being alive to later, to give the reader longer to stew in Rey’s shock.