Coolio. What really put me off about that scene was that she wasn’t making any noises whatsoever. Obviously you can adjust the volume of the grunt as well as the pitch but here it is:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ItBINdTjMGj2Eq4J5Nk24ZU11QrXGC_N/view?usp=sharing
I do have another line suggestion for the Leia/Rey wayfinder scene, but I’ll save it for later today from clogging up the feed. IMO, it’s significantly better than the last one.