Smart thought Neerb! I like the line, but I see what you’re saying Jar Jar. Maybe a combo of an extra word, plus shortening the silence might help sell it.
I also worry about the inflection 100% fitting the new scene, but maybe the right levels and such could help it blend. And like Neerb said, if nothing works you could just have Rey respond a little more quickly.
EDIT: I also wonder if you could slow the line down ever so slightly so it doesn’t feel so rushed.