I was asking if you’d add back him wanting to tell Rey of his Force-sensitivity; at least a large part of his arc involves him moving on from her altogether, so he stops trying to tell her. The point of this in the actual film is to reinforce his attachment to Rey, and when he does move on from her he stops trying to tell her of his Force-sensitivity, showing how he’s moved on and let go of Rey.
The lack of a payoff of Finn wanting to tell Rey of his Force-sensitivity is the point.