Just to get your wheels turning, here is a version of that scene I did that doesn’t just drastically change the major points of the conversation:
I’ve kept thinking about your version of the hangar scene, and the more I think about it, the cleverer it gets. I love how vulnerable Kylo seems by mentioning his call to the light, and how it simultaneously preserves that great pair of rhetoric devices. It wouldn’t work in the book for various factors, but it works so well in the film, and achieves the same effects at the same moments, which I find really fascinating.