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Post #1417994

Author
ildiem
Parent topic
The Clone Wars: Refocused [COMPLETE] + Subtitles for season one!
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Date created
16-Mar-2021, 11:51 PM

Noticed in the opening crawl, the third sentence ends in a comma when it probably shouldn’t. (“…whose crystal factories produce ray shields,”)