The original file has a hissing sound, cleaning it up brought it to the forefront but it can be hidden once the audio is matched to the rest of the sentence, i can make it all sound consistent in the future if you can send me the whole scenes dialogue without the music, that way all that needs to be done is to turn the volume either up or down.

Alt version - https://drive.google.com/file/d/1PT9m3VMDvcw1fd3CuMtjzOSoquaiwSGJ/view?usp=sharing

But just listening to the version you posted, it fits so well, if you could make it match Nev’s version of the scene it would be perfect.