I agree with ThisIsCreation. Great job, MR! I think the line and pacing feels right, but the cutting back and forth to Luke is a bit abrupt. The second cut to Luke feels like it’s clearly the same camera move as the first. Can you hold on Rey instead of cutting back for “This is your fight”? I think it’s better to see Rey for this line, anyway, so we can see her thinking it over.
Post #1417202
- Author
- poppasketti
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- The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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- Date created
- 13-Mar-2021, 4:12 PM