You guys made me unpack my computer for THIS!!! haha. I still wanna tweak the shot timings but I think this works well. https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1417183/action/topic#1417183
The zoom in luke and the cut to Rey seems very abrupt but if you could keep the shot on Rey until she turns around it would work brilliantly (other than the line needing a compression and eq)