I’ll mock it up but I expect not to use it. Worth seeing about.
I extended the Rey shot, faded the music together to make it longer, tested the 'Always be with you" no idea if this works,
Audio integration wise it’s well done but the way it’s delivered sounds like it’s part of the same train of thought as the previous sentence, rather than the next. I don’t think you can fix this no matter how much you extend, the cut from Rey to Luke is there to signify the shift in his dialogue. It would have to go after “a thousand generations.”
Personally though I’m not sure I understand what is being added here…