I’ll mock it up but I expect not to use it. Worth seeing about.
I extended the Rey shot, faded the music together to make it longer, tested the 'Always be with you" no idea if this works,
I just managed to do this exact same thing except without extending anything. Probably way too squished in my version, though. I do like this order of dialogue: “She surrendered her saber to me and said that one day it would be picked up again by someone who would finish her journey. We’ll always be with you. A thousand generations live in you now. But this is your fight.”
Here is your exact same thing but without any extensions: