Seems just a little wrong to have the camera move a tiny bit before settling on Luke. It’d probably be better to keep more or the shot or lose more of it.
I’d feel bad to fully remove that shot of Luke because of how hard Nev worked on the outside of the hut lol. That’s why I tried to leave a small portion of the shot in for the concept. But if we feel this line replacement is worth it then by all means chop it out.