Eddie Dean, in A Strike at the Heart part 2, the final sentence of the intro text is “but the sith lord’s intentions must remain hidden”.
I’m wondering about the grammar there; if the word “must” means that the sith lord APPEARS to be hidden, or that he ‘should’ be hidden etc.
I was thinking that “but the sith lord’s intentions remain hidden” is a bit more concise, what do you think?