My first thought would be, If the deleted scene of Rey running to the village is added to TLJ would that be considered “lesson 3”?
I also like how Luke interrupts Rey. It matches Luke’s attitude in TLJ. I also like 4.
I think this could go somewhere. Great work, dude.
P.S. I cut the “It was fear that kept me here”. line from Luke as I felt it contradicted the “Fear is the destiny of a Jedi” line.
The full line is actually, “Confronting your fears is the destiny of a Jedi.”