I agree, let me see what I can do with opacity and maybe working up gradually to having that shot be just a little bit lighter.
I’ll try to do another pass tonight.
Guys, this scene will become the philosophical meaning of the movie’s tittle… the RISE (of the sun) of Skywalker
Starting the scene in dark represents Rey’s loss of hope. Seeing the ship burn and seeing it reflect on her face, she has lost all hope.
When Luke lifts the X Wing and we see the sun rise and shine, it signifies the hope rising in her again.